It’s done! Finished! Took me a whole year, but I actually FINISHED A FANFIC!! (aren’t you so proud?) Do tell me what you think. As for me, I love it and I hate it. There are some parts I think turned out really well, but… I hate Usagi’s character! Or lack thereof, in this story. And that’s the biggest thing that bugs me. Otherwise, I’m quite pleased with it. ^_^ Anyway, I hope you all enjoyed reading it, and thanks for your emails and reviews! (you know who you are) I’ve been throwing around ideas for a sequel from Usagi’s point of view, but we’ll see. There are so many other fanfic projects I would like to start, and I’m happy to have this one finished and out of my way.
Now, you’re wondering what the rest of this is about, ne? “I thought the story was over!?” Well, as a special treat to you guys and apologies for making you wait so long … I now present - BS Bloopers! The Scenes That Didn’t Make It. -_-;
Scene 1:
Downtown, nameless little town in southern Japan. Seiya barrels out into the street not seeing the car right in front of her. The car hits her and Seiya lands sprawled on the hood, motionless.
Taiki: Seiya, Seiya, are you alright!
Yaten: Seiya, wake up!!
Seiya still doesn’t move.
Yaten: (eyes widening) Is
she dead?
Taiki: No way! She
couldn’t be! Could she…?
Both girls gingerly poke the raven-haired figure with no response.
Taiki: I think she is
dead!
Yaten: (covering her
mouth) Oh no… I don’t believe it… Seiya’s dead?
Silence.
Yaten: ………I get her
leather jacket.
Taiki: Yaten, how can you
be so selfish!?
Yaten: I just…
Taiki: Seriously, who says
you get the jacket? Besides, it fits me better.
Yaten: Well, then I at
least get her guitar.
Taiki: You already have a
guitar! Since when do you get claim to all the good stuff? In that case, I want
her manga collection.
Yaten: What? You don’t
even read manga! Greedy!
Taiki: Speak for yourself!
Seiya: (twitch) …Wait
‘till I’m dead first, will ya?!!! Geez…
Usagi: (bursting onto the
scene) What?? Dead?? No! How could you do this to me?! I didn’t even get a part
in this fic!! You’re supposed to fall in love with me! You better come back to
life, right now, Mister!
Seiya: Actually, it’s
‘Miss’.
Usagi: 0.o
Abigail: (thwacks Seiya)
Baka! You just ruined my entire plot!
Scene 2:
Seiya and Usagi race through the carnival trying to escape the photographers that are after them.
Seiya: Quick, hide in
here!
They both duck underneath a booth.
Usagi: Why are we running?
Seiya: Paparazzi!
Usagi: 0.o?? Yatzee? (we’re
running from a dice game?)
Seiya: No! Paparazzi!
Usagi: o.0?? Pepperoni?
Seiya: (sigh)
Usagi: I’m hungry.
Usagi: (sniff) (pokes her
head above the booth) Ooo… pizza!
Scene 3:
Three Lights’ apartment. Seiya and Yaten are in the middle of a heated argument:
Yaten: I’m sick of it, Taiki! She doesn’t care a thing about anyone’s wishes but her own! It always has to be her way. Always! You dragged us into this band of yours to start with –
Seiya: You agreed to it, Yaten, so don’t give me that bull –
Yaten: Well, I thought Three Lights meant we’d each get a say in what goes on! You act like you’re the only member around here! I’m tired of being ignored! You never even notice me anymore! You’re always caught up in football or your music or that – that girlfriend of yours! You don’t even comment on my hair like you used to. What happened to us, Seiya? I feel like I’m just another person in your life. I feel like you don’t even care for me at all anymore! Does she really mean that much to you? How could you do this to me? (voice cracking) Seiya – don’t you love me anymore?!
Seiya: Um……
Yaten: I just can’t take it!
Yaten buries her face in her hands and runs to the bedroom, sobbing.
Taiki: Nice going. Now she’s going to be wailing all night and I won’t get any sleep. You better go apologize now.
Seiya: (sweatdrop) Oi, oi…
The streets of Tokyo. As the truth finally comes out:
Seiya: Yes. Yaten is a female. And…and… so am I.
Usagi: …………….
Usagi: Ha! I knew it! I was right! Pay up, Mako-chan.
Makoto pops up out of nowhere.
Makoto: Aw, no way! She’s a girl? But she looks so masculine!
Seiya: (twitch, sweatdrop)
Makoto grudgingly hands over several large-sum bills as the blonde girl gloats.
The streets of Tokyo. Seiya falls to the ground, as her assaulter flees into the night.
Usagi: (seeing the blood and the unconscious Seiya) Aiieeee! Seiya!! Help, somebody, help!!
A girl comes running across the street.
Minako: What happened? What happened? (notices Seiya) Agghh!
Usagi looks at Minako.
Usagi: ………..Do I know you from somewhere?
Minako: Um… not that I know of…
Usagi: See, because you look really familiar…
Minako: (brightens) Aha! You must have seen me on TV! I’m an idol, you know. (grin)
Usagi: Uso!! You’re an idol? I would have never known!
Minako: (sweatdrop) Oi. That stings.
Usagi: Ehe… gomen. But maybe that is why I recognize you. (ponders)
Minako: Of course!! See, I just released my debut album, Ai no Megami. Have you heard it? Surely you must have! It’s the hottest new thing on the record stand!
Usagi: Nuh-uh. I’ll be sure to pick it up! I’m sure it’s really awesome!
Minako: (starry-eyed) Aaaah! You’re such a sweetheart! I’ll even autograph it for you!
Usagi: Sugoi!
Minako: You see, the first track is my favorite, because….
The two blondes walk away chatting. Meanwhile, Seiya bleeds to death on the sidewalk.
Seiya: Oi, why are you always so cruel to me?!
Abigail: I’m sorry, I can’t help it! Forgive me? Pleeease? (clings to Seiya’s neck) I really do love you, you know I do!!!!
Seiya:…………… (I think I understand how Yaten feels about the annoying fangirls now…)
Abigail: What was that?
Seiya’s hospital room. Just before she can fall asleep, she notices a figure in shadows, and soft malicious laughter.
Seiya: Who’s there??! Show
yourself!
Figure: I warned you,
didn’t I?
Seiya: Who are you!?
The figure steps forward revealing itself to be…
Makoto: You see, no one
hurts my Usagi-chan and gets away with it.
Seiya: Ehe…
Makoto: (cracks knuckles)
Seiya: (frantically
pushing the call button) Nurse! Nuuurse!!!
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I should stop before this gets carried away. ^_^;
Ja ne, and love to all!
~Abigail